homework

Hello Ms. [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I didn\'t think about the problem because hunting is illegal in our country. 

>> I didn\'t think about that problem because hunting is illegal in our country. 

In order to protect farmers, they are allowed to hunt on special days. 

>> CORRECT!

However, I saw hunting that some people take catch rabbits, pigs, cows, dogs, and chickens around me when I was young, 

>> However, I saw some people hunting rabbits, pigs, cows, dogs, and chickens that were around me when I was young.

and I also ate them, and I think I couldn\'t help it because we lacked foods at that time. 

>> I also ate them, and I think I couldn\'t help it because we lacked food at that time. 

But it is different now. I can\'t even eat because I can\'t hunt. 

>> But it is different now, I can\'t even eat hunted meat anymore because I can\'t hunt. 

These days, I am trying to eat vegetables as much as I can

>> These days, I am trying to eat more vegetables as much as I can.