HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What is something that you would have a hard time giving up and why?
-> My Lego bricks are somethings that I would have a hard time giving up.
First, I spent lots of money for my Lego bricks.
Second, I spent lots of times with my Lego bricks.
That\'s why my Lego bricks are somethings that I would have a hard time giving up.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Your Lego really means a lot to you. That\'s nice. Take good care of them so when you grow up, you have something to look back for. Anyways, thank you for sharing.
-Teacher Elise
First, I spent lots of money for my Lego bricks.
Second, I spent lots of times with my Lego bricks.
That\'s why my Lego bricks are somethings that I would have a hard time giving up.
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My Lego bricks are somethings that I would have a hard time giving up.
>> My Legos are some of the things that is hard to give up.
First, I spent lots of money for my Lego bricks.
>> I spent a lot of money for my Lego bricks.
Second, I spent lots of times with my Lego bricks.
>> I also spend a lot of time and effort building my Lego bricks.
That\'s why my Lego bricks are somethings that I would have a hard time giving up.
>> That\'s why these are the things that would be hard for me to resist.
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