homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have a friend whom you treat like a sister? Tell me about her.
Yes I have a friend~!!
Her name is Cho Eun Yul^^
She is very kind to every people!!
And she also never tell a lie~
So I can trust her like my younger sister~!!
강사 첨삭
Jenny, Always keep the passion in learning the English language.
~Teacher Aki
Yes I have a friend~!!
>> Correct.
OR: Yes I have a friend whom I treat like a sister.
Her name is Cho Eun Yul^^
>> Correct.
OR: She is Cho Eun Yul.
She is very kind to every people!!
>> Correct.
OR: She is very kind to everyone.
And she also never tell a lie~
>> And she also never tell lies.
So I can trust her like my younger sister~!!
>> So I trust her like a younger sister.
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