HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could meet any famous person, dead or alive, who would it be and why?
-> If I could meet any famous person, dead or alive, I want to meet Einstein.
First, if I could meet Einstein, I can be very good at science such as physics, and quantum mechanics.
Second, if I could meet Einstein, I can discover secrets in this universe.
That\'s why I want to meet Einstein if I could meet any famous person, dead or alive.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! That sounds fascinating. You can get the chance to know a lot of things that most people don\'t know about. Anyways, thank you for sharing.
-Teacher Elise
First, if I could meet Einstein, I can be very good at science such as physics, and quantum mechanics.
That\'s why I want to meet Einstein if I could meet any famous person, dead or alive.
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If I could meet any famous person, dead or alive, I want to meet Einstein.
>>CORRECT
First, if I could meet Einstein, I can be very good at science such as physics, and quantum mechanics.
>> If I could meet Einstein, I can ask for tips so that I can be very good at different aspects of science such as physics and quantum mechanics.
Second, if I could meet Einstein, I can discover secrets in this universe.
>> If I could meet him, I can also discover secrets in this universe.
That\'s why I want to meet Einstein if I could meet any famous person, dead or alive.
>>CORRECT
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