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Share your most memorable dream you\'ve had.
-> My most memorable dream I\'ve had is a dream that my apartment was burning with fire.
I was watching my apartment burning with fire at the playground.
Firemen came to my burning apartment and sprinkled the water to my apartment.
I dreamed it when I was 8 years old, but I am remembering it until now.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Oh no. That didn\'t sound good. :( I hope it won\'t happen to you again. Sometimes bad dreams occur if you are very exhausted throughout the day so I suggest that you shouldn\'t exhaust yourself too much. :)
-Teacher Elise
I was watching my apartment burning with fire at the playground.
Firemen came to my burning apartment and sprinkled the water to my apartment.
I dreamed it when I was 8 years old, but I am remembering it until now.
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My most memorable dream I\'ve had is a dream that my apartment was burning with fire.
>> The most memorable dream I\'ve had was when I dreamt of my apartment burning on fire.
I was watching my apartment burning with fire at the playground.
>> I was watching my apartment burn as I was at the playground.
Firemen came to my burning apartment and sprinkled the water to my apartment.
>> CORRECT
I dreamed it when I was 8 years old, but I am remembering it until now.
>> I had that dream when I was 8 years old but I s
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