homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you define/describe a successful person?
-I think seccessful person is a lot of true friends around me.
Friends trust me all of thins, and support me always.
Have there been any failures that made your life better?
-not yet.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Hazel!
Thank you for responding. I\'m glad to hear you have such trustworthy friends. Well done!^^
~Eica~
How do you define/describe a successful person?
>>CORRECT
-I think seccessful person is a lot of true friends around me.
-I think seccessful person is a lot of true friends around me.
>>I think a lot of successful people are the true friends around me.
Friends trust me all of thins, and support me always.
Friends trust me all of thins, and support me always.
>>Friends who trust me through thick and tin and support me always.
Have there been any failures that made your life better?
Have there been any failures that made your life better?
>>CORRECT
-not yet.
-not yet.
>>None yet.
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