homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What\'s the best part about living in Korea?
The best part about living in korea is my parents lives and I have a job in there,
I don\'t have a gob in America.Actually It\'s good to no stress,no pressure,and It\'s very comfortable. But I can\'t make a money,I fee frustrated. I\'d like to go on a trip with my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]Bi! Thank you for sharing this! :) Only a few more months and then you\'ll be back in Korea. I bet you\'ll miss a lot of things as well in America. :)
-Teacher Elise
I don\'t have a gob in America.
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The best part about living in korea is my parents lives and I have a job in there.
>> The best part about living in Korea is that my parents are there and I have a stable job.
I don\'t have a gob in America.
>> I don\'t have a job in America.
Actually It\'s good to no stress,no pressure,and It\'s very comfortable.
>> Actually, if feels good. There\'s no stress, no pressure and it\'s very comfortable for me.
But I can\'t make a money,I fee frustrated. I\'d like to go on a trip with my family.
>> But I can\'t make money with this. I feel frustrated. I\'d like to go on a trip with my family.
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