HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What\'s the best part about living in Korea?
-> The best part about living in Korea is convenience store.
First, I can buy lots of useful things in convenience store.
Second, I like ramen very much, and convenience store has lots of ramen.
That\'s why the best part of living Korea is convenience store I think.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I love ramen too! I\'m loving Korean ramen nowadays. Can you suggest good ramen to me?
-Teacher Elise
First, I can buy lots of useful things in convenience store.
Second, I like ramen very much, and convenience store has lots of ramen.
That\'s why the best part of living Korea is convenience store I think.
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The best part about living in Korea is convenience store.
>> The best part about living in Korea are the convenience stores.
First, I can buy lots of useful things in convenience store.
>>CORRECT
Second, I like ramen very much, and convenience store has lots of ramen.
>> Second, I like ramen very much and convenience stores have lots of ramen.
That\'s why the best part of living Korea is convenience store I think.
>>CORRECT
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