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2021-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of using social media accounts? I think Using social media accounts has a advantages and disadvantages. The advantages is that good thing with my friends.and It is easy to memorize for my life. I think disadvantages is that my privacy is violated, I hate this,

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I think Using social media accounts has a advantages and disadvantages.
>> I think using social media accounts have advantages and disadvantages.

The advantages is that good thing with my friends.and It is easy to memorize for my life.
>> One advantage is that you can contact your friends easily and share some happenings in your life.

I think disadvantages is that my privacy is violated, I hate this,
>> A disadvantage that I hate is that our privacy is sometimes violated.

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