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What are you thoughts about having face to face classes even if there\'s a pandemic still?
-> I think it\'s very dangerous thing. But I think we have to meet each other to face to face.
First, we are living a community life. And we have to meet face to face if we want to live in a community.
Second, according to my experience, I think offline meeting is better than online meeting.
Third, it\'s more good for our eyes to meeting he / she / people face to face.
That\'s why I think we have to meet each other to face to face even Covid is still pandemic.
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First, we are living a community life.
Second, according to my experience, I think offline meeting is better than online meeting.
Third, it\'s more good for our eyes to meeting he / she / people face to face.
That\'s why I think we have to meet each other to face to face even Covid is still pandemic.
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I think it\'s very dangerous thing.
>> I think it\'s a very dangerous thing to do.
But I think we have to meet each other to face to face.
>> Either way, we still need to meet each other face to face.
First, we are living a community life.
>> First, we are living in a community.
And we have to meet face to face if we want to live in a community.
>> CORRECT
Second, according to my experience, I think offline meeting is better than online meeting.
>> CORRECT
Third, it\'s more good for our eyes to meeting he / she / people face to face.
>> Lastly, I think it\'s more beneficial to meet face to face.
That\'s why I think we have to meet each other to face to face even Covid is still pandemic.
>> That\'s why I think we have to meet each other to face to face even if there\'s still a pandemic.
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