homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Online communication is do online, there may be limitations is conveying one\'s opinions in detail.
But they can communication online anywhere.
It is also comfortable because the are no restrictions.
They often work fron home because of the corona virus and this also seems to have affected using online communication.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
>>> CORRECT
Online communication is do online, there may be limitations is conveying one\'s opinions in detail.
Online communication is do online, there may be limitations is conveying one\'s opinions in detail.
>>> Online communication is done online. There may be limitations which convey one\'s opinions in detail.
But they can communication online anywhere.
But they can communication online anywhere.
>>> But they can communicate online anywhere.
It is also comfortable because the are no restrictions.
It is also comfortable because the are no restrictions.
>>> CORRECT
They often work fron home because of the corona virus and this also seems to have affected using online communication.
They often work fron home because of the corona virus and this also seems to have affected using online communication.
>>> They often work from home because of the coronavirus and this also seems to have affecting online communication.
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