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How do you plan to motivate yourself to improve your English?
-> I plan to be perfect to motive yourself to improve my English.
First, if I think I don\'t have to be perfect, I can fall out from the exam.
Second, it has no any disadvantages to doing perfect English.
That\'s why I plan to be perfect for improving my English skills.
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First, if I think I don\'t have to be perfect, I can fall out from the exam.
Second, it has no any disadvantages to doing perfect English.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!
I plan to be perfect to motive yourself to improve my English.
>>I plan to be fluent in English that\'s why I motivate myself.
First, if I think I don\'t have to be perfect, I can fall out from the exam.
>> First, if I think that I don\'t have to be perfect, then I will fail in a lot of exams.
Second, it has no any disadvantages to doing perfect English.
>> Second, there are no disadvantages when it comes to being fluent in English.
That\'s why I plan to be perfect for improving my English skills.
>> That\'s why I plan to be fluent in it.
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