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2012-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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'When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.' Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position Answer-> When I took a test to enter university, my score was same as usal. But most students except me raised the score. So I couldn't enter the university what I wanted. I studied hard to enter a good university during 3 years. But I didn't have luck. So I think people need some luck to suceed.

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Hi, Amy.Nice writing! I believe everything happens for a reason. I am not sure, maybe destiny? But I know that success and luck is always awaiting for each and every person. We just sometimes need to be patient and not to loose hope. Keep it up!Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you: \'When people succeed, it is because of hard work.>>CorrectLuck has nothing to do with success.>>Correct\' Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?>>Correct Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position>>CorrectAnswer-> When I took a test to enter university, my score was same as usal. >>Answer-> When I took a test to enter a university, my score was same as usual. But most students except me raised the score.>>Correct So I couldn\'t enter the university what I wanted. >>So I couldn\'t enter the university I wanted. I studied hard to enter a good university during 3 years.>>I studied hard to enter a good university for 3 years.But I didn\'t have luck. >>Correct So I think people need some luck to suceed. >>So I think people need some luck to succeed.

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