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I don,t want to have a part time job I just want to study^^
but when i have to I will work at the caffe be case it will be easy at the mean time
or I will work at the library or work at the bookstore
thank 🦄🌈
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Hello Ruby,
I think it is better to just focus on your studies rather than have a part-time job, but if you do, maybe working in the library or bookstore would be good for you because you could help a lot of students find the book they need. ^ ^
-Rachel
I don,t want to have a part time job I just want to study^^
>> I don\'t want to have a part-time job because I just want to study.
but when i have to I will work at the caffe be case it will be easy at the mean time
but when i have to I will work at the caffe be case it will be easy at the mean time
>> But when I have one, I will work at the cafe because it will be easy for the meantime.
or I will work at the library or work at the bookstore
or I will work at the library or work at the bookstore
>> Or I will work at the library or the bookstore.
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