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I agree to a certain extent.
I heard that there are many hungry people because of the shortage of food.
So we need to many genetically modified foods and quickly distribute them.
That way, many people don\'t have to strave.
But these genetically modified foods are a risk.
Genetically modified foods containing two toxins.
It can cause cancer.
Therefore you\'d better eat less genetically modified foods.
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I agree to a certain extent.
>>> CORRECT
I heard that there are many hungry people because of the shortage of food.
I heard that there are many hungry people because of the shortage of food.
>>> I heard that there are many hungry people because of food shortage.
So we need to many genetically modified foods and quickly distribute them.
>>> So we need many genetically modified foods and distribute them immediately.
That way, many people don\'t have to strave.
That way, many people don\'t have to strave.
>>> That way, many people won\'t starve.
But these genetically modified foods are a risk.
But these genetically modified foods are a risk.
>>> But these genetically modified foods are not safe.
Genetically modified foods containing two toxins.
Genetically modified foods containing two toxins.
>>> CORRECT
It can cause cancer.
It can cause cancer.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore you\'d better eat less genetically modified foods.
Therefore you\'d better eat less genetically modified foods.
>>> CORRECT
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