HOMEWORK
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How do you get in touch with nature?
-> I learn the ways to protect the environments of Earth to get in touch with nature.
First, I have to volunteer somethings, and there are lots of things that keep Earth\'s environments.
Second, I read lots of books that is about keeping environment of Earth.
Third, I learn about the environment unclean, and I learn how to keep Earth\'s environments.
So I think learning the ways to protect the environments of Earth is very good thing.
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Second, I read lots of books that is about keeping environment of Earth.
Third, I learn about the environment unclean, and I learn how to keep Earth\'s environments.
So I think learning the ways to protect the environments of Earth is very good thing.
I learn the ways to protect the environments of Earth to get in touch with nature.
>> I have learned that the ways to protect the environment of Earth is to get in touch with nature.
First, I have to volunteer somethings, and there are lots of things that keep Earth\'s environments.
>> First, I have to volunteer on something that has something to do with protecting the Earth\'s environment.
Second, I read lots of books that is about keeping environment of Earth.
>> Second, I should read a lot of books on how to protect it as well.
Third, I learn about the environment unclean, and I learn how to keep Earth\'s environments.
>> Lastly, I should learn how to maintain it as well.
So I think learning the ways to protect the environments of Earth is very good thing.
>> CORRECT
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