HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
If you are going to save up some money for something, what would it be and why?
-> If I am going to save up some money for something, I think it will be a nice new bicycle.
First, I have my own bicycle, but I want more cool and light bike than my own bike.
Second, I want to show my cool and light bicycle to my friends.
Third, if I get a cool and light bicycle, I think I will very proud of myself that I bought that.
That\'s why if I am going to save up some money for something, I think it will be a nice new bicycle.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! That sounds nice! That\'s why you should start saving up some money as early as now.
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Third, if I get a cool and light bicycle, I think I will very proud of myself that I bought that.
That\'s why if I am going to save up some money for something, I think it will be a nice new bicycle.
If I am going to save up some money for something, I think it will be a nice new bicycle.
>> If I am going to save up some money for something, I think it will for a nice new bicycle.
First, I have my own bicycle, but I want more cool and light bike than my own bike.
>> I already have my own bicycle but I want a lighter and cooler one.
Second, I want to show my cool and light bicycle to my friends.
>> If I will have one, I want to show it off to my friends.
Third, if I get a cool and light bicycle, I think I will very proud of myself that I bought that.
>> I will be very proud of myself if I will have one of those.
That\'s why if I am going to save up some money for something, I think it will be a nice new bicycle.
>> CORRECT
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