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Q:What do you think will happen if your country is overpopulated?
A:If our country becomes overpopulated, we send it to a neighborhood where not many people live
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If our country becomes overpopulated, we send it to a neighborhood where not many people live
>> If our country becomes overpopulated, we need to send people to places where there are not that much people.
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