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What do you think will happen if your country is overpopulated?
-> If my country, Korea is overpopulated, there will be lots of advantages, and disadvantages.
First, the economy of Korea will be very strong because of lots of citizens in Korea.
Lots of producers and consumers will exchange the goods and services, and then the Korea economy will be strong.
But there is lots of disadvantages such as traffic jam and house prices rising.
There will be lots of traffic jams, and the house prices will rise because of overpopulated.
That\'s why I thought there will be lots of advantages and disadvantages if Korea is overpopulated.
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Hi [이름]! The quality of live overall would be affected if overpopulations is present. That\'s why the government should take notice of the inflation of population in their country. :)
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There will be lots of traffic jams, and the house prices will rise because of overpopulated.
That\'s why I thought there will be lots of advantages and disadvantages if Korea is overpopulated.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!
If my country, Korea is overpopulated, there will be lots of advantages, and disadvantages.
>> If my country, Korea, is overpopulated, there will be lots of advantages and disadvantages.
First, the economy of Korea will be very strong because of lots of citizens in Korea.
>> First, the economy of Korea will be very strong because there are a lot of citizens.
Lots of producers and consumers will exchange the goods and services, and then the Korea economy will be strong.
>>Lots of producers and consumers will exchange goods and services.
But there is lots of disadvantages such as traffic jam and house prices rising.
>> Although,, there are also disadvantages such as traffic jam and increase in house prices.
There will be lots of traffic jams, and the house prices will rise because of overpopulated.
>> This would be the effect of over population.
That\'s why I thought there will be lots of advantages and disadvantages if Korea is overpopulated.
>> This explains my answer.
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