Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you agree that friendships matter more than family relations? Why? Why not?
--> No, I don\'t agree with it. Family is the most important in my life. Even if I fight terribly(?) with my family members, we finally make up because we are family. And even when I do a great wrong, my family always is on my side.
Of course, friend is also necessary in my life, but I think there is no relationship that is more important than family.
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No, I don\'t agree with it.
>>> CORRECT!
Family is the most important in my life.
>>> CORRECT!
Even if I fight terribly(?) with my family members, we finally make up because we are family.
>>> CORRECT!
And even when I do a great wrong, my family always is on my side.
>>> And even if I make a big mistake, my family is always on my side.
Of course, friend is also necessary in my life, but I think there is no relationship that is more important than family.
>>> Of course, friend is also necessary in my life, but I think there is no relationship that is more important than family.
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