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I grew up in a house with a yard and trees.
I played with my friends there and played in the water
in the yard in summer.
Now my mother still lives there.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! I think you had a wonderful childhood experience. It seems so fun. I love it! Thank you for sharing it! See you!-Faith-
I grew up in a house with a yard and trees.>> CORRECT
OR I used to live in a house with a yard and it was surrounded by trees.
I played with my friends there and played in the water in the yard in summer.
I played with my friends there and played in the water in the yard in summer.
>> I played with my friends there and played with water in the yard in summer.
Now my mother still lives there
>> Now, my mother still lives there.
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