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Do you think it would be a good idea to have 3 days worth of weekends? Explain your answer.
-> I think there will be adventages and disadventages to having 3 days worth of weekends in my country, Korea.
Here, Korea has some people that working very hard, and some people work 17 hours.
So I think having 3 days worth of weekends in Korea, is a good idea.
But if there are 3 days worth of weekends, some disadvantages will made.
If there are 3 days worth of weekends, we can be very lazy because about it.
So I think having 3 days worth of weekends in Korea, can be cause some disadventages.
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Hi [이름]! You are correct. Having 3 days worth of weekend can come along with advantages and disadvantages too. It just depends on the person on how he/she will interpret it :)
Here, Korea has some people that working very hard, and some people work 17 hours.
So I think having 3 days worth of weekends in Korea, is a good idea.
But if there are 3 days worth of weekends, some disadvantages will made.
If there are 3 days worth of weekends, we can be very lazy because about it.
So I think having 3 days worth of weekends in Korea, can be cause some disadventages.
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I think there will be adventages and disadventages to having 3 days worth of weekends in my country, Korea.
>> I think there will be advantages and disadvantages in having 3 days worth of weekends in my country, Korea.
Here, Korea has some people that working very hard, and some people work 17 hours.
>>Here in Korea, we have some people who work really hard for 17 hours.
So I think having 3 days worth of weekends in Korea, is a good idea.
>> So I think having 3 days worth of weekends here would be a good idea.
But if there are 3 days worth of weekends, some disadvantages will made.
>> Although there are some disadvantages as well.
If there are 3 days worth of weekends, we can be very lazy because about it.
>> If this happens, we can become very lazy because of it.
So I think having 3 days worth of weekends in Korea, can be cause some disadventages.
>> That\'s why I think it can also come with disadvantages.
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