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Is peer pressure beneficial or harmful? Explain your answer.
-> I think peer pressure can be harmful to some particular situations.
ex) I am good at exersize then my friend, but all students have to get a same education.
Then it can be very harmful to me.
But it can cause lots of problems to do not doing a peer pressure.
If we do not do peer pressure, it can cause discreamination.
But I think peer pressure can be harmful to some particular situations.
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ex) I am good at exersize then my friend, but all students have to get a same education.
Then it can be very harmful to me.
But it can cause lots of problems to do not doing a peer pressure.
If we do not do peer pressure, it can cause discreamination.
But I think peer pressure can be harmful to some particular situations.
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I think peer pressure can be harmful to some particular situations.
>> CORRECT
ex) I am good at exersize then my friend, but all students have to get a same education.
>> For example, I am good at exercising and my friend isn\'t and they are pressuring me to be like him.
PS: KINDLY PARAPHRASE THIS SENTENCE.
Then it can be very harmful to me.
>> CORRECT
But it can cause lots of problems to do not doing a peer pressure.
>> It can also cause some problems like discrimination.
If we do not do peer pressure, it can cause discreamination.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
But I think peer pressure can be harmful to some particular situations.
>> This is why I think peer pressure can be harmful to some particular situations.
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