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1.I'm not particularly good at sports. 2.He's ill so he's at home today. 3. Can I borrow a pen from you, please? 4. Everything depends on you. 5. Oxford is famous on its universities. I surfed the internet yesterday. I want to buy digital tv for my mother lived in Daegu. Though She likes watching TV, she have an analog TV. It will not use analog TV next year. Analog transmission will be stoped at the end of this year. It's too expensive. I should save my money to buy it. I will save 100000 won a month until my mother birthday. My mother birthday is on June. I can save about 600000 won. I will pay by credit card extra.

Hello my dear, thank you so much for sending your composition.. You are such a very sweet lady Miss. [Name], and you want to buy a TV for your mom..:) I know saving is not easy,kkk...but you will do this for your mom..^^ Anyway, I made some modifications my dear in your composition.. Please read and study the following my dear. Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..^^ -Teacher Cam-   1.I\'m not particularly good at sports. >>correct!2.He\'s ill so he\'s at home today. >>correct!3. Can I borrow a pen from you, please? >>correct!4. Everything depends on you. >>correct!5. Oxford is famous on its universities.>>Oxford is famous for it\'s universities.I surfed the internet yesterday. >.correct!I want to buy digital tv for my mother lived in Daegu. >>I want to buy a diital TV for my mother who lives in Daegu.Though She likes watching TV, she have an analog TV. >>Though she likes watching TV, she has an analog TV.It will not use analog TV next year. >>But analog TV will be obsolete next year.Analog transmission will be stoped at the end of this year.>>correct!It\'s too expensive. >>correct!I should save my money to buy it. >>correct!I will save 100000 won a month until my mother birthday. >>I will save 100000 won a month until my mother\'s birthday.My mother birthday is on June. >>My mother\'s birthday will be on June.I can save about 600000 won. I will pay by credit card extra. >>correct!