Homework

2012-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1) Jane __is watching___ a film. (to watch) 2) He ___carried__ a box. (to carry) 3) They __are helping___ their father. (to help) 4) John and Amy _swap____ things. (to swap) 5) I _talked____ to Andrew. (to talk) I went to the beauty salon. A hairdresser had my hair permed. My husband went to the beauty salon after work. As soon as he see me he said seriously "you look older than your age. This perm doesn't look nice to you" "you don't think to see me until perm becames to hold dowm ( ?) ( be removed or be resolved??? I don't know what to use suitable verb. anyway~) Hw said playfully "you don't think to see me until your hair style looks like a straight hair." I didn't know what to do after hearing his word. ^^

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Hi there [이름]! Thank you for making your assignment and sending me your composition. I hope you enjoyed a lot going to the beauty salon. Take care! -Teacher Abby- Here are my corrections for you: 1) Jane __is watching___ a film. (to watch) >> Jane watched a film.2) He ___carried__ a box. (to carry) >>Correct3) They __are helping___ their father. (to help) >>They helped their father.4) John and Amy _swap____ things. (to swap) >>John and Amy swapped things.5) I _talked____ to Andrew. (to talk)>>CorrectI went to the beauty salon. >> CorrectA hairdresser had my hair permed. >> CorrectMy husband went to the beauty salon after work. >> CorrectAs soon as he see me he said seriously \"you look older than your age. >> CorrectThis perm doesn\'t look nice to you\" >> Correct \"you don\'t think to see me until perm becames to hold dowm ( ?) >> Don\'t you like to see me until this hairstyle became permanent. ( be removed or be resolved??? I don\'t know what to use suitable verb. anyway~) >> ( Is it be removed or be resolved? Anyway, I don\'t know what a suitable verb to use.)Hw said playfully \"you don\'t think to see me until your hair style looks like a straight hair.\" >>He said playfully \"you don\'t think to see me until your hair style looks like a straight hair.\"I didn\'t know what to do after hearing his word. ^^ >>Correct

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