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I think watching a movie on a cell phone is different from watching a movie in a theater.
If you watch a movie on a cell phone, you can watch it comfortably at home without going out.
Also, it can be seen cheaply.
But if you see it in a theater, you can see new movie, and you can see it on the big screen and hear it vividly.
It also remains in your memory for a long time.
So I think it is better to watch at the theater.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think watching a movie on a cell phone is different from watching a movie in a theater.
>>> CORRECT
If you watch a movie on a cell phone, you can watch it comfortably at home without going out.
If you watch a movie on a cell phone, you can watch it comfortably at home without going out.
>>> CORRECT
Also, it can be seen cheaply.
Also, it can be seen cheaply.
>>> CORRECT
But if you see it in a theater, you can see new movie, and you can see it on the big screen and hear it vividly.
But if you see it in a theater, you can see new movie, and you can see it on the big screen and hear it vividly.
>>> But if you watch in a theater, you could see new movies on the big screen and could hear it vividly.
It also remains in your memory for a long time.
It also remains in your memory for a long time.
>>> CORRECT
So I think it is better to watch at the theater.
So I think it is better to watch at the theater.
>>> CORRECT
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