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2021-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you had the chance to change your name, would you do it? Why or why not? -> If I had the chance to change my name, I would not change my name. If I want to change my name, I have to pass some prucedures in the court. And my name is one of the special thing in my life that my parents built. And if I change my name, my family or my friend will very confuse. Actually, I want to change my name little, because some people think I am girl because of my name. But I think it is nothing, so I would not change my name if I had the chance to change my name.

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Hi [이름]! There is a lot of reasons why some people want to change their names but good for you that you wouldn\'t want to change yours. It would be such a hassle if you did! And I think your name is very unique. I like it too! :)

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If I had the chance to change my name, I would not change my name.

>> CORRECT

If I want to change my name, I have to pass some prucedures in the court.

>> If I will change my name, I have to do a lot procedures at court.

And if I change my name, my family or my friend will very confuse.

>> And if I change my name, my family or my friends would get confused.

Actually, I want to change my name little, because some people think I am girl because of my name.

>>Actually, I want to change my name a little bit because some people think I am girl because of it.

But I think it is nothing, so I would not change my name if I had the chance to change my name.

>>But I think it is nothing, so I would not change my name if I had the chance to do so.

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