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2021-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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Writing Task: Write your script for your introduction/greetings on your first day at work. Hi Everyone. I\'m kam hyun woo from T2. I\'m 31year old. and i already got married. and i have a 2years old daughter. I worked at T2 for 5years. i mainly covered nsw category. It\'s pleasure work to here, I beleive you will help me a lot. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello Logan! I enjoy reading your homework!

~Teacher Sheila

Writing Task: Write your script for your introduction/greetings on your first day at work.

Hi Everyone.

>>Hi everyone!

I\'m kam hyun woo from T2.

>>I\'m Kam Hyun Woo from T2.

I\'m 31year old. and i already got married. and i have a 2years old daughter.

>>I\'m 31 years old and I\'m already married with a 2 year old daughter.

I worked at T2 for 5years.

>>CORRECT

i mainly covered nsw category.

>>I mainly covered the NSW category.

OR>>My main job is for NSW category.

It\'s pleasure work to here, I beleive you will help me a lot.

>>It\'s a pleasure to work here and I believe you will help me a lot.

Thank you.

>>CORRRECT

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