HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Which one do you like more, relaxing travels or adventurous travel? Explain your answer.
-> I like relaxing travels more than adventurous travels.
My purpose of traveling is resting, not a doing adventure.
I am studing hard at my school and my house, so I have to rest sometime.
And the time of resting is traveling to me.
So I like relaxing travels more than adventurous travels.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Yes, sometimes we need some days off and traveling is a good way to do it.
My purpose of traveling is resting, not a doing adventure.
I am studing hard at my school and my house, so I have to rest sometime.
And the time of resting is traveling to me.
So I like relaxing travels more than adventurous travels.
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I like relaxing travels more than adventurous travels.
>>CORRECT
My purpose of traveling is resting, not a doing adventure.
>>My purpose of traveling is to rest, not doing adventures.
I am studing hard at my school and my house, so I have to rest sometime.
>>I study hard in my school and my house, so I need to have some rest time.
And the time of resting is traveling to me.
>> All my travel trips are resting time.
So I like relaxing travels more than adventurous travels.
>> CORRECT
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