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2021-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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I don\'t think it\'s a waste of time. But I don\'t fully agree. Studying literature is also important. But I think grammar is more important in all languages. Also, there are many subjects that they have to study. So, they don\'t have time to study. Therefore, it would be better to study literature before coming to high school.

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Hi there [이름]! Life is like a moving river, and you can be at the mercy of the river if you don\'t take action to steer yourself in a predetermined direction. Have a motivated Thursday!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

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I don\'t think it\'s a waste of time.

>>> CORRECT
But I don\'t fully agree.

>>> CORRECT
Studying literature is also important.

>>> CORRECT
But I think grammar is more important in all languages.

>>> CORRECT
Also, there are many subjects that they have to study.

>>> CORRECT
So, they don\'t have time to study.

>>> CORRECT
Therefore, it would be better to study literature before coming to high school.

>>> Therefore, it would be better to study literature before going to high school.

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