homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Do you agree that the three telecom companies are overcharging customers for their 5G services? Why?
I see eye to eye with the writer.
I have heard from my friend that 5G is more expensive than 4G but the speeds of them are similar.
Many people would collect the phone using 5G because they expected the new thing compared to former one.
But, if they use a cell phone similar to a former one paying for more dollars, it is an unfair thing.
For this reason, I think that the three telecom companies are overcharging customers now.
2. Do the telecom customers have the right to get a refund? Please explain.
I think the telecom customers have the right to get a refund.
They bought the new cell phone expecting a new speed and new functions.
However, their wishes were not fulfilled due to the lack of nationwide network.
Accordingly, they have to get a refund because they weren’t provided what they wanted.
강사 첨삭
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1. Do you agree that the three telecom companies are overcharging customers for their 5G services? Why?>> CORRECT
I see eye to eye with the writer.
I see eye to eye with the writer.
>> CORRECT
I have heard from my friend that 5G is more expensive than 4G but the speeds of them are similar.
I have heard from my friend that 5G is more expensive than 4G but the speeds of them are similar.
>> I have heard from my friend that 5G is more expensive than 4G but the speed of them are similar.
Many people would collect the phone using 5G because they expected the new thing compared to former one.
Many people would collect the phone using 5G because they expected the new thing compared to former one.
>> Many people would collect phones using 5G because they expected the new thing compared to former ones.
But, if they use a cell phone similar to a former one paying for more dollars, it is an unfair thing.
But, if they use a cell phone similar to a former one paying for more dollars, it is an unfair thing.
>> But, if they use a cell phone similar to the former one paying for more dollars, it is an unfair thing.
For this reason, I think that the three telecom companies are overcharging customers now.
For this reason, I think that the three telecom companies are overcharging customers now.
>>CORRECT
OR Therefore, I think that the three telecom companies are unreasonably charging customers now.
2. Do the telecom customers have the right to get a refund? Please explain.
2. Do the telecom customers have the right to get a refund? Please explain.
>> CORRECT
I think the telecom customers have the right to get a refund.
I think the telecom customers have the right to get a refund.
>> CORRECT
They bought the new cell phone expecting a new speed and new functions.
They bought the new cell phone expecting a new speed and new functions.
>> They bought their new cell phones expecting a higher speed and new functions.
However, their wishes were not fulfilled due to the lack of nationwide network.
However, their wishes were not fulfilled due to the lack of nationwide network.
>> CORRECT
OR However, they were disappointed due to the insufficient nationwide network.
Accordingly, they have to get a refund because they weren’t provided what they wanted.
>> Accordingly, they have to get a refund because their expectation was not provided.
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