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I agree to a certain extent.
Little job satisfaction also reduce work efficiency.
Also, having a job that they don\'t want to do, their satisfaction little decreases.
But because they can\'t like doing what they want to do, they have to endure some low job satisfaction.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I agree to a certain extent.
>>> CORRECT
Little job satisfaction also reduce work efficiency.
Little job satisfaction also reduce work efficiency.
>>> Job satisfaction could also reduce work efficiency.
Also, having a job that they don\'t want to do, their satisfaction little decreases.
Also, having a job that they don\'t want to do, their satisfaction little decreases.
>>> Also, having a job which is not your interest, isn\'t satisfying.
But because they can\'t like doing what they want to do, they have to endure some low job satisfaction.
But because they can\'t like doing what they want to do, they have to endure some low job satisfaction.
>>> But since they don\'t like what they\'re doing, they have to endure and be satisfied.
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