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2021-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What stresses you the most and how to you handle it? -> Before the Covid-19, I didn\'t get any stresses if I don\'t get any bad feeling because of some bad things. But after Covid-19... I think I got lots of stresses and also I thought lots of things. It was very good to go out with my family or friends before the Covid-19. But I don\'t want to go out with my family ( but curiously, I want to go out with my friends. ) after the Covid-19. It is different with thinking like this. -> \'I don\'t want to go out. it is so hassle.\' I think I am so tired with doing somethings that is doing because of Covid-19 such as online classes. So stresses that is caused because of Covid-19 makes me tired and hard to do somethings. Covid have to be distroyed by someone or something fastly.

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Hi [이름]! Yes, this is true. A lot of people have been majorly affected by the pandemic but hopefully everything will turn back the way it should be. :)

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Before the Covid-19, I didn\'t get any stresses if I don\'t get any bad feeling because of some bad things.

>> Before the Covid-19, I don\'t usually get any stress. If nothing bad happens to me, I don\'t fee; any stress.

But after Covid-19... I think I got lots of stresses and also I thought lots of things.

>>But ever since the pandemic came, I started to think a lot about things which cases me stress.

It was very good to go out with my family or friends before the Covid-19.

>>It was good to go out with my family or friends before this but now, we usually have second thoughts when going outside.

But I don\'t want to go out with my family ( but curiously, I want to go out with my friends. ) after the Covid-19.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE

It is different with thinking like this. -> \'I don\'t want to go out. it is so hassle.\'

>>It is different when you have the thinking that you don\'t want to go outside because it is so hassle.

I think I am so tired with doing somethings that is doing because of Covid-19 such as online classes.

>>I think I am so tired doing things such as online classes due to the virus.

So stresses that is caused because of Covid-19 makes me tired and hard to do somethings.

>>The stress that this pandemic causes makes me tired and makes everything harder to do.

Covid have to be distroyed by someone or something fastly.

>> COVID has destroyed so many things.

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