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2021-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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The advantage is that they can have confidence. They can also challenge everythings. But disadvantage is they can have conceit. Also, if they fail, they can have a sense of depression. It is good to give them these message situationally. And don\'t give too much.

강사 첨삭

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA

The advantage is that they can have confidence.

OR>>> The advantage is that they can gain confidence.
They can also challenge everythings.

>>> They can also challenge everything.
But disadvantage is they can have a conceit.

>>> CORRECT
Also, if they fail, they can have a sense of depression.

>>> CORRECT
It is good to give them these message situationally.

>>> CORRECT
And don\'t give too much.

>>> CORRECT

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