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Who is your role model in your life? Why?
-> My role model is Einstein.
We think he is very smart genius.
He did lots of things about physics.
He thought about special relativity and dimension theory.
And I wasn\'t konw about why he is very smart genius untill now a day.
But I read some books about physics, and there was about special theory and dimension theory.
So I could know why Einstein is a smart genius physicist.
And I am interested about physics now a day, so I could know who is Einstein.
And I think special relativity and dimesion theory are very gifted think.
So my role model is Einstein in my life.
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Hi [이름]! We all have role models in our lives that have such a huge role on what kind of person we are today. We look up to them a lot. We gain a lot of lessons as well. It\'s nice that you show them respect that they deserve. May all the things you\'ve learned from him be passed to more generations. :)
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My role model is Einstein.
We think he is very smart genius.
He did lots of things about physics.
He thought about special relativity and dimension theory.
And I wasn\'t konw about why he is very smart genius untill now a day.
But I read some books about physics, and there was about special theory and dimension theory.
So I could know why Einstein is a smart genius physicist.
And I am interested about physics now a day, so I could know who is Einstein.
And I think special relativity and dimesion theory are very gifted think.
So my role model is Einstein in my life.
>> CORRECT
We think he is very smart genius.
>> I think that he is a very smart person.
He did lots of things about physics.
>> He did lots of things for the evolution of physics.
He thought about special relativity and dimension theory.
>> CORRECT
And I wasn\'t konw about why he is very smart genius untill now a day.
>>And I didn\'t know why he was considered a genius until today..
But I read some books about physics, and there was about special theory and dimension theory.
>>But I read some books about physics and I found out that he discovered the special theory and dimension theory.
So I could know why Einstein is a smart genius physicist.
>> That\'s why I knew that he was a smart physicist.
And I am interested about physics now a day, so I could know who is Einstein.
>> I am interested in physics nowadays that\'s why I would like to know more about Einstein.
And I think special relativity and dimesion theory are very gifted think.
>> I also think that he is very gifted to discover these theories.
So my role model is Einstein in my life.
>>So my role mode in life is Einstein.
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