homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Do you enjoy your holiday in Italy?
2.I saw a great film on TV last night.
3.How old were you when you started your first job?
4.Do you see your doctor last weekend?
5.How do you make your homework?
Hi Teacher~
First, thank you for asking about my boss yesterday in our class.
Though She didn't go to work still, She will be better.
Thank you.
Yesterday, I heard a good news.
My senior HyeKyung will marry on April.
I have known her since university.
She has met with her fiance for 10 years.
Finally, they get married.
I heartily congratulate them.
People heard that news worried about me.
Because I'm still single.
I don't care about that. but I envy the couple.
Actually I envy honeymoon than their wedding.
Korea wedding is just ceremony, never special.
It takes only 20 min for wedding.
The Wedding hall which I went to had 3 times wedding in a hour.
Anyway, they will go to Singapol for their honeymoon.
I want to travel somewhere too.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework and once again, doing a great job in writing!^^
I always appreciate you making and sending composition on our website..
By the way, I\'m also hoping that your boss will get better soon..
And about your superior who\'s gonna get married on April, that is really a very good news!:)
ANd Miss. [Name], don\'t worry about being single. If you\'re happy with what you are right now then go for it!
Just do whatever will make you happy Miss. [Name]..:)
Talk to you again later my dear..
T.Cam
1.Do you enjoy your holiday in Italy?
>>Did you enjoy your holiday in Italy?2.I saw a great film on TV last night.
>>correct3.How old were you when you started your first job?
>>correct4.Do you see your doctor last weekend?
>>Did you see your doctor last weekend?5.How do you make your homework?
>>How did you make your homework?Hi Teacher~First, thank you for asking about my boss yesterday in our class.
>>First of all, I wanna say thank you for asking about my boss\'s situation yesterday in our class.Though She didn\'t go to work still, She will be better.
>>correct!
>>She didn\'t go to work still but I know she will be better soon.Thank you.
>.correctYesterday, I heard a good news.
>>correctMy senior HyeKyung will marry on April.
>>correct
>>Hye Kung who is my superior will get married on April.I have known her since university.
>>correctShe has met with her fiance for 10 years.
>>She me her fiance for 10 years already.Finally, they get married.
>>Finally, they are gonna get married!:)I heartily congratulate them.
>>correctPeople heard that news worried about me.
>>People worry about me because of this news.Because I\'m still single.
>.correctI don\'t care about that. but I envy the couple.
>>correctActually I envy honeymoon than their wedding.
>>Actually, I envy their honeymoon more than their wedding.Korea wedding is just ceremony, never special.
>>Korean wedding is just a ceremony, it is never special.It takes only 20 min for wedding.
>>This ceremony takes only 20 minutes.The Wedding hall which I went to had 3 times wedding in a hour.
>>The wedding hall which I\'ve been to usually conducts 3 wedding in an hour.Anyway, they will go to Singapol for their honeymoon.
>>Anyway, they will go to Singapore for their honeymoon.I want to travel somewhere too.
>>correct
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