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2021-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Vertical city is good for small country. Because, although the country is small if it has tall buildings many people can live and work. But if the country is not small, I think horizontal living is more good. Because it is not crowded. So it has no traffic congestion. Therefore it is advantages and disadvantages, I think it would be better to choose according to country.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Vertical city is good for a small country.

>>> CORRECT
Because, although the country is small if it has tall buildings many people can live and work.

>>> CORRECT
But if the country is not small, I think horizontal living is more good.

>>> But if the country is not small, I think horizontal living is better.
Because it is not crowded.

>>> CORRECT

So it has no traffic congestion.

>>> CORRECT
Therefore it is advantages and disadvantages, I think it would be better to choose according to country.

>>> Therefore, there are both advantages and disadvantages, depending on the country\'s land area.

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