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There are three way to improve confidence
First, I can enhance my ability very much.
With sufficient ability, I need not to nervous
even though I didn\'t prepare beforehand.
Second, I can prepare enough.
Even though unfamiliar work, if I prepare various cases I can have confidence.
Last, To enhance self-esteem is good way to improve confidence.
Someone who loves and understands himself can correspond camly even though he run into difficult situations.
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- T. Rina
1. There are three way to improve confidence
>> There are three ways to improve confidence.
2. First, I can enhance my ability very much.
>> There are three ways to improve confidence.
2. First, I can enhance my ability very much.
>> CORRECT!
3. With sufficient ability, I need not to nervous
>> With sufficient ability, I don\'t need to be nervous.
OR: With sufficient ability, I need not be nervous.
4. even though I didn\'t prepare beforehand.
>> CORRECT!
5. Second, I can prepare enough.
5. Second, I can prepare enough.
>> CORRECT!
6. Even though unfamiliar work, if I prepare various cases I can have confidence.
>> Even though I am unfamiliar with some work, I can have confidence if I prepare in some various cases.
7. Last, To enhance self-esteem is good way to improve confidence.
>> Last, to enhance self-esteem is a good way to improve confidence.
>> Last, to enhance self-esteem is a good way to improve confidence.
8. Someone who loves and understands himself can correspond camly even though he run into difficult situations.
>> Someone who loves and understands himself can correspond calmly even though he runs into difficult situations.
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