HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What skill do you want to learn in the future and why?
-> I want to learn some pro computer programing skills in the future.
We are growing and living in the world of fourth industrial revolution.
And in the future, there will be lots of things about computer and AI.
And if we want to controll the fourth industrial revolution world, we have to learn about how to program some things.
There are lots of things about computer and AI nowadays, and it will be same in the future.
So if we know about computer programing such as computer programing languages, we can controll our future world.
Also the world is making lots of things about computer and AI, so we can earn money with our computer programing knowledge.
So if I can learn any skills for my future, I want to learn about computer programing and knowledge of AI.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! That sounds nice! Change is inevitable so we have to adapt to it. One of the things that quickly evolves it technology so we have to be familiarized with it. :)
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We are growing and living in the world of fourth industrial revolution.
And in the future, there will be lots of things about computer and AI.
And if we want to controll the fourth industrial revolution world, we have to learn about how to program some things.
There are lots of things about computer and AI nowadays, and it will be same in the future.
So if we know about computer programing such as computer programing languages, we can controll our future world.
Also the world is making lots of things about computer and AI, so we can earn money with our computer programing knowledge.
So if I can learn any skills for my future, I want to learn about computer programing and knowledge of AI.
I want to learn some pro computer programing skills in the future.
>>CORRECT
We are growing and living in the world of fourth industrial revolution.
>>We are growing and living in a world of the fourth industrial revolution.
And in the future, there will be lots of things about computer and AI.
>> CORRECT
And if we want to controll the fourth industrial revolution world, we have to learn about how to program some things.
>>And if we want to control the fourth industrial revolution world, we have to learn about how to program some things.
There are lots of things about computer and AI nowadays, and it will be same in the future.
>>CORRECT
So if we know about computer programing such as computer programing languages, we can controll our future world.
>> So if we know about computer programing such as computer programing languages, we can control our futuristic world.
Also the world is making lots of things about computer and AI, so we can earn money with our computer programing knowledge.
>>Also, the world is making lots of things about computer and AI, so we can earn money with our computer programing knowledge.
So if I can learn any skills for my future, I want to learn about computer programing and knowledge of AI.
>>CORRECT
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