Homework
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Q:hat are the things you can do to make your parents happy?
A:I think you will be happy that my body is healthy!
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Hi [이름]! That sound great. Continue working on it and make your parents proud :)
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I think you will be happy that my body is healthy!
>> I think they will be happy if they see my body is healthy.
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