Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree to a certain extent.
Thease days, parent is too busy to difficult care about their\'s children.
So, it is helpful for their\'s grandparent and uncle, aunt to help.
Also children can learn about manners from their\'s grandparent.
And they get sense of closeness.
Therefore, the advantages are bigger than disadvantages, it is helpful to upbring is very useful to parent and children.
강사 첨삭
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I agree to a certain extent.
>>> CORRECT
Thease days, parent is too busy to difficult care about their\'s children.
Thease days, parent is too busy to difficult care about their\'s children.
>>> These days, parents are too busy to take care of their children.
So, it is helpful for their\'s grandparent and uncle, aunt to help.
So, it is helpful for their\'s grandparent and uncle, aunt to help.
>>> So, there is a need for their grandparents uncle, and aunt to help.
Also children can learn about manners from their\'s grandparent.
Also children can learn about manners from their\'s grandparent.
>>> Also, children can learn about good manners from their grandparents.
And they get sense of closeness.
And they get sense of closeness.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore, the advantages are bigger than disadvantages, it is helpful to upbring is very useful to parent and children.
Therefore, the advantages are bigger than disadvantages, it is helpful to upbring is very useful to parent and children.
>>>Therefore, the advantages are bigger than the disadvantages, it is helpful to up bring children by their parents.
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