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How important is learning about space?
I think it isn\'t only learning about the space, we also have to explore the space.
Because we should prepare enviornmental pollution. Very nicely, space exploration is the solution.
We can find new sources of fuels and minerals, even \'the second Earth\' in the space.
And it has many reasons for learning and exploring the spae.
강사 첨삭
Hi Paul,
Human space exploration helps to address fundamental questions about our place in the Universe and the history of our solar system. Through addressing the challenges related to human space exploration we expand technology, create new industries, and help to foster a peaceful connection with other nations. Enjoy exploring outer space.
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How important is learning about space?
>>How important is learning about space?(Correct)
I think it isn\'t only learning about the space, we also have to explore the space.
>>I think it isn\'t only learning about the space, we also have to explore the space.(Correct)
Because we should prepare enviornmental pollution.
>>We should prepare for environmental pollution that might occur in the future.
Very nicely, space exploration is the solution.
>>Very nice space exploration is the solution.
We can find new sources of fuels and minerals, even \'the second Earth\' in the space.
>>We can find new sources of fuels and minerals, even \'the second Earth\' in space.
And it has many reasons for learning and exploring the spae.
>>And there are many reasons for learning and exploring the space.
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How important is learning about space?
I think it isn\'t only learning about the space, we also have to explore the space.
Because we should prepare enviornmental pollution. Very nicely, space exploration is the solution.
We can find new sources of fuels and minerals, even \'the second Earth\' in the space.
And it has many reasons for learning and exploring the spae.
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