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2021-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Quenny

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If you could have a robot to do all your chores, what would you choose for it to do? It\'s a very abstruse question. if I should only one chores, I will choose \'cooking meal\'. Because I am not good at cooking meal. But I want to have nice meals, so I would choose \'cooking meal\'.

강사 첨삭

Hi Paul, 
When you prepare your own meals, you have more control over the ingredients. By cooking for yourself, you can ensure that you and your family eat fresh, wholesome meals. This can help you to look and feel healthier, boost your energy, stabilize your weight and mood, and improve your sleep and resilience to stress. Enjoy your meal.
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If you could have a robot to do all your chores, what would you choose for it to do?
>>If you could have a robot to do all your chores, what would you choose for it to do?(Correct)
It\'s a very abstruse question.
>>It\'s a very abstruse question.(Correct)
if I should only one chores, I will choose \'cooking meal\'.
>>if I could only choose one chore, I will choose \'cooking meal\'.
Because I am not good at cooking meal. 
>>Because I am not good at cooking a meal. 
But I want to have nice meals, so I would choose \'cooking meal\'.
>>But I want to eat delicious meals, so I would choose \'cooking meal\'.
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If you could have a robot to do all your chores, what would you choose for it to do?

It\'s a very abstruse question.
if I should only one chores, I will choose \'cooking meal\'.
Because I am not good at cooking meal. But I want to have nice meals, so I would choose \'cooking meal\'.

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