Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think cellphone is most important machine

>> I think the cellphone is the most important machine.
Because cellphone is calling, many information etc we are need

>> It\'s because we use it for calling or learning about the many information that we need.
It is need in society

>> It is needed in society.