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2021-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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What are the things you can do with a computer? Thesedays I making stock application which use to computer with my team. The computers can to do many things. I think world conneted by online-web. So address of internets starting is world wide web(www). It would be conneting from computer to peoples. The computer\'s ability is be endless. We have to use it in positively. To. Teacher.Vance I have any questions. I don\'t know well about relative pronoun. So I can\'t make well sentence. Tell me please, How to make good sentence. Thanks. :D

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

Thesedays I making stock application which use to computer with my team.

>>These days, I make stock applications which we can use in a computer with my team.

The computers can to do many things.
>>Computers can do many things.

I think world conneted by online-web.
>>I think the world is connected by the online-web.

It would be conneting from computer to peoples.

>>We could connect one person to another using a computer.

The computer\'s ability is be endless.
>>A computer\'s ability is endless.

We have to use it in positively.

>>We have to use it appropriately.

To. Teacher.Vance

I have any questions. I don\'t know well about relative pronoun. So I can\'t make well sentence. Tell me please, How to make good sentence.

>> Start with creating simple sentences with 4-5 words first. (including the subject and the verb) This way you can practice simple sentences first before making complicated sentences. ^^

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