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2012-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I refuse to pay anything (until) you do the work properly. 2. You look (as if) you haven't eaten for a week. 3. I came early (so that) I could talk to you privately. 4. I don't mind if you go out for lunch (so that) you're back for the meeting at two. 5. Are you OK? You look (as if) you have a problem. I went to the public library near my home last Saterday. I have to return some books. I borrowed three books. The title of first book is "the easiest grammar in Korea". It's not easy as the title. The Second book is about photo. It's so easy to be read that there are many pictures on the book. The Third book is a novel. Actually I could not read the book. The loan period is for 2 weeks. It's so short that I can't read all of them. I returned them. I wanted to borrow them again. but it cannot borrow the book that returned the day again. It can borrow the book after a day. So I will visit the library any day now.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], happy Monday! Thank you once again for making your homework today, job well done on your composition. By the way, I made some modifications on your composition so Miss. [Name] just read and study the following: Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..^^ Teacher Cam 1. I refuse to pay anything (until) you do the work properly. >>correct!2. You look (as if) you haven\'t eaten for a week. >>correct!3. I came early (so that) I could talk to you privately. >>correct!4. I don\'t mind if you go out for lunch (so that) you\'re back for the meeting at two. >>correct!5. Are you OK? You look (as if) you have a problem. >>correct!I went to the public library near my home last Saterday. >>I went to the public library near m house last Saturday.I have to return some books. >>I had to return some books.I borrowed three books. >>correct!The title of first book is \"the easiest grammar in Korea\". >>correct! (Observe proper capitalizaation)It\'s not easy as the title. >>It\'s not as easy as the title.The Second book is about photo. >>correct >>The second book is about pictures.It\'s so easy to be read that there are many pictures on the book. >>It\'s very easy to read if there are many pictures on the book.The Third book is a novel. >>correct!Actually I could not read the book. >>correct!The loan period is for 2 weeks. >>correct!It\'s so short that I can\'t read all of them. >>correct!I returned them. I wanted to borrow them again. >>correct!but it cannot borrow the book that returned the day again. >>But it\'s impossible to borrow the same book that you returned on the same day.It can borrow the book after a day. >>It\'s possible to borrow the book the day after tomorrow.So I will visit the library any day now. >>So I will visit the library any time.

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