Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

When i was child want to scientist

>> When I was a child, I wanted to be a scientist.
Beacuse i was child science very interested

>> Because when I was a child, I was very interested in science.
And my self development new technology

>> Also, I wanted to develop a new technology.