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I think my favorite place will be my house I think 🏠. My home have a living room and there is tv,sofa,table, and lot more. Kitchen have refrigerator, A big desk, one the place where my mom cook. There are also my grandma\'s room and my mom\'s room.
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I think my favorite place will be my house I think 🏠.
>> I think my favorite place will be my house.
My home have a living room and there is tv,sofa,table, and lot more.
>> My home has a living room. We have a tv, sofa, table, and a lot more in there.
Kitchen have refrigerator, A big desk, one the place where my mom cook.
>> Our kitchen has a refrigerator, a big desk, and this is the one the place where my mom cook.
There are also my grandma\'s room and my mom\'s room.
>> There is also my grandma\'s room and my mom\'s room.
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