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India is experiencing an issue that we are all afraid to face-extreme air pollution. People even have to buy clean air that comes in tanks just to be able to be able to breathe clean air.
Due to pollution the number of people getting infected also rose up to about 300,000 and above a day.
What do you think is a good solution to this problem?
I think India deserves it becuase they had the festival publicly in a shared pool despite the danger of covid.
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your idea!
Actually I didn\'t know about that!
I\'m so shocked!
I think India deserves it because they had the festival publicly in a shared pool despite the danger of covid.
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