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I would discribe myself as a violin.
because my favorite instrument is a violin.
and the violin will be just my sise because I will describe it as me.
I want to describe me as a calimba too.
it will make pretty sounds and also made of wood, my dad is buying it for me and I am happy and exited and thanked for my dad.
thank you^^
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby,
I think a violin suits you best. A violin produces beautiful sounds and it harmonizes with other instruments. You are beautiful inside and out and you make friends with other people easily.
-Rachel
I would discribe myself as a violin.
>> I would describe myself as a violin.
because my favorite instrument is a violin.
because my favorite instrument is a violin.
>> correct
and the violin will be just my sise because I will describe it as me.
and the violin will be just my sise because I will describe it as me.
>> and the violin will just be my size because it describes me.
I want to describe me as a calimba too.
I want to describe me as a calimba too.
>> I want to describe myself too as a kalimba.
it will make pretty sounds and also made of wood, my dad is buying it for me and I am happy and exited and thanked for my dad.
it will make pretty sounds and also made of wood, my dad is buying it for me and I am happy and exited and thanked for my dad.
>> It will make pretty sounds and it is also made of wood. My dad is buying it for me and I am happy, excited and thankful to my dad.
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